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2010 September 8

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ashraume/NIIT_Technologies

NIIT Technologies is a Tier 2 software service organization in India and is ranked among top 20 IT services company in India. Most of the IT services company in India already have information about them on Wiki so I thought of adding one for NIIt Technologies also.

Ashraume (talk) 05:29, 8 September 2010 (UTC)

2010 September 7

Julia Parnell - Film & Television Producer within New Zealand or http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Julia_Parnell

Julia Parnell attended Southseas Film and Television School, going on to work at several independent television companies around Auckland, including Touchdown, Screentime and Greenstone Pictures, before becoming the Head of Production at ButoBase Film & TV Company.

She worked at ButoBase for 6 years, producing, directing and providing creative input into more than three hundred television episodes over fourteen series.

In 2010, Julia won the Great Southern Film & Television Woman to Watch Award at the Women in Film and Television NZ Awards, having been a finalist in the same category in 2009.

Parnell left Butobase in early July 2010 to start her own production company, Notable Pictures, and is currently developing a documentary, factual and drama slate.

125.236.208.168 (talk) 05:14, 7 September 2010 (UTC)

Request for someone to review Workers (Gong Ren) and remove "unreviewed article" header.

Hi, I wrote this new article, Workers (Gong Ren), and requested feedback on July 15th. I was hoping someone could look at it and remove the "unreviewed article" header. Thanks very much!


Pyxelator (talk) 05:27, 7 September 2010 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jevid

I have authored an article on the life and work of American Painter Richard Keyes. Can you please give me any feedback before I put it live? Specifically, do I have enough quality references and also, any suggestions as to why one of the images won't show? Thanks for your time!


Jevid (talk) 05:42, 7 September 2010 (UTC)

Theo Verbey

I would like some feedback on this page (biography of living composer Theo Verbey) , as I am new to Wikipedia. Much appreciated, and thanks!

Stevey-22 (talk) 07:31, 7 September 2010 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/AIM_at_Melanoma_Foundation

My first Wikipedia article... can someone tell me if it follows standard guidelines? I already checked the guidelines myself, but am looking for someone more familiar with Wikipedia to reassure me that I did it right.

Ahdoot (talk) 08:25, 7 September 2010 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Knowlarity_Communications#History

I am new to submitting articles at wikipedia. Please help me improve my submits. Please give me feedbacks on the same

Knowourba (talk) 11:22, 7 September 2010 (UTC)

LSTI

Please review the the page for LSTI, thanks you


Qualcomm.Germany (talk) 15:41, 7 September 2010 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jvaningen/Mycobacterium_mantenii

Dear colleagues,

After receiving mails from colleagues that found Mycobacterium mantenii in various samples in different parts of the world, I have decided to establish a Wikipedia article for Mycobacterium mantenii, a species in the Mycobacterium family of bacteria. This species was originally described and published by me and my colleagues in the Netherlands and Italy. This is my first full article; I have used lay-outs applied by previous articles on mycobacteria for reference and completeness. I look forward to hearing your suggestions. Sincerely,

Jakko van Ingen

Jvaningen (talk) 16:34, 7 September 2010 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Houstongal82/_Kevin_Warren_Sloan

I have received feedback once before and as requested, added several more sources and removed any connotational words. I would like to main it to the main space but am open to any suggestions for improvement.

Houstongal82 (talk) 17:17, 7 September 2010 (UTC)

American Psychiatric Nurses Association

This page describes the purpose and structure of the association as well as general information about Psychiatric Mental Health Nurses. Please provide feedback. Thanks!


American Psychiatric Nurses Association (talk) 20:13, 7 September 2010 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sir_Rod_Entertainment

Do I still not have enough sources?

Mcki6534 (talk) 20:23, 7 September 2010 (UTC)

User:Alieneks/Infernal_Underground:"The_Project_Rescue"

Please Can review the article about this game... is a complement of my other article of Darkleaf Entertainment... so this is the game developed by Darkleaf...

Actually this game is in development stage so when it will be more complete I'll add more info

Alieneks (talk) 03:47, 8 September 2010 (UTC)

2010 September 6

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Force_Fed_Lies_(Band)#External_links

Rivethead147 (talk) 04:19, 6 September 2010 (UTC)

The above article has been deleted. Shearonink (talk) 12:37, 7 September 2010 (UTC)

PUT TITLE HERE within FIEND (Metal Band) e.g. User:Example/Lipsum or Cats or http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Example/Lipsum

Standonrubble (talk) 06:34, 6 September 2010 (UTC)

Broken link above, but article has been deleted anyway. Shearonink (talk) 12:39, 7 September 2010 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:HistoryPecanwood/History_of_Pecanwood_Estate

This is an article written by one of the Developers of this Estate. I can't seem to publish it as my article hasn't got enough reliable source or isn't notable enough. I need help please. I do not know can help me. I need this article published so other users can edit it asap.

Thanks

HistoryPecanwood (talk) 08:50, 6 September 2010 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Spencerbartz/John_V._Hager

This is a biography of John V. Hager. A candidate for California's 23rd congressional race. I attempted to create this article before, but it was taken down and referred to as a 'vanity candidate.' The candidate has obtained the number of signatures necessary to appear on the ballot, and is appearing on southern California news challenging incumbent Lois Capps to debates. I believe this to be noteworthy because if Capps were to be unseated by Hager, or the outcome of the race changed by Hager, Hager would have a national and international influence in congress or by having caused someone else to be in congress. I don't understand what is specifically wrong since I have found 5 other such wikipedia articles of candidates who were private civilians before declaring their candidacy (i.e. no political experience).


Spencerbartz (talk) 09:06, 6 September 2010 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Matt_Sky

Just need some structural help, plenty of reputable news links to back this article up but I'm still a little unfamiliar with the best way to setup the page. Thanks so much!

Robotman23 (talk) 10:41, 6 September 2010 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/360Amigo_System_Speedup

Hello guys, Will you help me with this article? I found 360Amigo System Speedup and it did a good job cleaning my computer. It is worth adding it to the Wikipedia community.


Villesoft (talk) 13:22, 6 September 2010 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Alexgrant2006/_intact_KOF_%28Kofi_Owusu_-_Rapper%29

Hi i am a fan of an upcoming artist named KOF from liverpool UK, his music is a fusion of rap and dance and i need help in letting the world know who he is, I have a bio i just need pics added and diocography info can you help with structure

thanks


Alexgrant2006 (talk) 13:29, 6 September 2010 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Vkvt-webmaster/Victor_Kan

Need comments before going live. Not sure if the references will be considered "reliable" or if more are needed (this is my first ever Wikipedia entry). Also need comments on the neutrality of the content.


Vkvt-webmaster (talk) 14:17, 6 September 2010 (UTC)

Saratoga Springs History Museum

I am not quite sure what qualifies as a reference in this article I created. I intended it to be a descriptive article about the Saratoga Springs History Museum. Please let me know if I need to make any other improvements to the article. Thanks!


Hughesrk (talk) 14:43, 6 September 2010 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Andylmusic76/Andrew_Lapp_(pianist)

Hello I recently submitted this article for Andrew Lapp. I have added credible sources and will continue adding more as time allows, but for some reason it will not let me submit my article. Is there something I am missing? What should I do?

Thank you,

LMC Records

Andylmusic76 (talk) 16:40, 6 September 2010 (UTC)

[[1]]

Hi, I created a new page for Charlotte Church's forthcomming 6th studio album "back to scratch" and was just wondering if it's ok? thanks.

Duphin (talk) 19:16, 6 September 2010 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ach.bhu/Bhupendra_Kumar

This page is about a personality who achieved huge milestones in very less age. I recommend this page to go online.

89.218.196.180 (talk) 19:16, 6 September 2010 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Cfdc49/Jesse_Armour_Crandall

I'm ready for some constructive feedback. In another wiki page Charles Henry Crandall it was suggested it might need to be wikified. I'm struggling to understand just what that is.

I need help in grouping together similar references/sources. That is, I refer to one magazine article and I've seen other sites where these are combined. I just don't know how to do it, I guess.


Thanks. Cfdc49 (talk) 20:10, 6 September 2010 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User:Tukenk/Enter_your_new_article_name_here&action=edit

I would like to find out how I can fix the [1]

2010 September 5

PUT TITLE HERE within [[ ]] e.g. User:Example/Lipsum or Cats or http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Example/Lipsum

122.169.31.85 (talk) 08:58, 5 September 2010 (UTC)

PUT TITLE HERE within International House Bucharest e.g. User:Mihaiganj/International House Bucharest

Do you think there are enough reliable sources? Can you publish this article or how it can be improved?


Mihaiganj (talk) 14:35, 5 September 2010 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Annafabulous/Grandcentralpub

Hi. Have read all the tutorials but still just want to check everything is correct before going live. Mainly in regards to presentation and referencing please. Many thanks :)


Annafabulous (talk) 16:15, 5 September 2010 (UTC)

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